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This term in week 4 year 5 & 6 went to Muriwai camp it was really fun and cool. At Muriwai we had a talent contest thing it was fun,me and Toby,Tiakiwai,Joshua,Benson did an act together. First we all sung row row row your boat with some beat boxing and harmonising. Next me and Toby had A beatbox battle and I did some dancing with my beat box. Tobys beat box was good but not cool A little bit later the results happens we had a tie the I did a solo dance and then it ended.
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You and your friends could definitely make some excellent and interesting sounds, Sione. Remember when you write digitally you need to leave a space after every comma and full stop. You can edit a post to fix up mistakes like this.
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